Nice Job...
This flash was pretty decent.
-The voice acting needs a little work and I would suggest getting a better microphone
-You should add color to your next animation because it makes it look nice
-While you did put forth a considerable amount of effort in this flash I would suggest maybe next time you come up with a better idea (Your own characters/series/etc.
I don't have anymore to add and with that I would like to say to you good luck on future projects.